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#1 Jan 04, 2018 12:07 pm

Calypso
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Whimsical Moments in Cricket

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#2 Jan 05, 2018 10:58 am

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Re: Whimsical Moments in Cricket

Calypso wrote:


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That cricket post from Calypso bothered me :  lol

Writing a short story about Cricket 'love on the field of play ' I assume  or some other loveee ,  doveleee stuff .
The TS is still waiting a little sample of that short story  ;  Cricket under the coconut trees.

Not crazy about that SA tour .... and now...
Whimsical Moments In Cricket.

But , Cricket and Calypso ..... eh ? lol

I am  really trying to talk short story here  ...... style , and  readability .  ( you dey New Historian)

Reading Calypso on TS and her use of words and expressions  (and bias) lol . I would have expected  a different type of short story ... Not Cricket

>>>>> Wilma watched as Clifford shook into his jacket , a self satisfied smile like Garfield the Cat drifted across his face.
He walked over to her , ran his fingers over her nappy  hair and said  " next week sugar " and walked towards the door .
Wilma , still lying on the floor , " muttered beast "    <<<<<


....... You are not Jane Austen .... JA.




sad.

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#3 Jan 07, 2018 10:03 am

Slice
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Very much so.  I am sure with some research, you could find better moments.

Last edited by Slice (Jan 07, 2018 10:04 am)

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#4 Jan 07, 2018 4:37 pm

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But, I'm concerned with the off-beat moments for their are  what make life fun!!!

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